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Old 03-20-2017, 01:01 PM   #55   Add To Ignore List  
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Default Re: Mordekai's Showcase

If you are writing honest feedback off as complaints you won't improve a lot.

That said, have some honest feedback: You need to work on your brushwork. Cubed rooms look boring. Try making pillars, paths, indentations in the walls and depressions in the floor, play with textures a bit. Other than that, for a beginner it's not looking bad at all.
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